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wr_day_10.md

correction

• monetary 和钱相关的事物的修饰词，eg。 the system of monetary exchange

• social problems,not society problem

• murder is most(没有ly) commonly committed（实施犯罪）

• class differences : 阶级差异

• throughout the world ;; not : throughout the earth

• much political strife(不同意)

translation

1. For a long time, school was considered as the only source for education. However,
   it’s not the same now.

imp: For years, school has been seen as the only source of education. But things are quite different now.

2. However, as each coin has it’s two side, we can’t ignore the disadvantage of early independence.

imp: However, as there are always two sides to every coin, we cannot turn a blind eye to the unavoidable disadvantage of early independence.

3. From what we have discussed above, we can see that the advantage of application of television beyond its disadvantage. Therefore, I feel strongly that television is one of the most great inventions in last centry.(世纪: century)

imp: From what has been discussed above, we can see that TV’s application does more good than harm to us. Therefore, I strongly approve of the notion that TV is one of the greatest inventions of last century.

4. However, about this thing, many people hold a different view.

imp: Howevern, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.

5. In my opinion, the urgent thing for young people after their tenth is put their limited time in the communication with family members who have much more social experience.

imp: From my point of view, what teenagers are in urgent need of is to spend their limited spare time learning from two-way communication with other family members, many of whom have more social experience than they do.

6. From above comparison(比较), everyone can has such a conclusion that it’s a unfair phenomenon(现象) that people in PE major can earn money much more than other specilist(专业人士==>professionals)

imp(?）: From the above comparison and contrast, anyone can safely conclude that it is an unfair phenomenon that sports professionals earn an amount of money that is so much larger than what any other professional earns.

7. However, some argue that children should go to school after their seven.

8. However(Nevertheless), many methods can be found to solve this problem.

imp: (Nevertheless) 然而，尽管如此

9. When compare the advantage to disadvantage carefully, it’s quite clear which one is the most powerful conclusion.(不言而喻==> self-evident)

imp: When the advantages and disadvantages are carefully compared, the most striking(强有力的) conclusion is self-evident.