it's amazing

it's amazing
how you can speak
right to my heart
without saying a word,
you can light up the dark
try as i may
i could never explain
what i hear when
you don't say a thing


the smile on your face
lets me know
that you need me
there's a truth
in your eyes
saying you'll never leave me
the touch of your hand says
you'll catch me
whenever i fall
you say it best
when you say
nothing at all

all day long
i can hear people
talking out loud
but when you hold me near
you drown out the crowd

try as they may
they can never define
what's been said
between your
heart and mine



(you say it best
when you say
nothing at all
you say it best
when you say
nothing at all)

the smile on your face
the truth in your eyes
the touch of your hand
let's me know
that you need me



(you say it best
when you say
nothing at all
you say it best
when you say
nothing at all)

the smile on your face
the truth in your eyes
the touch of your hand
let's me know
that you need me

(you say it best
when you say
nothing at all
you say it best
when you say
nothing at all)


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