Composition correction (suggestion letter)

本文是一位大学生对于学校宿舍网络接入的建议。作者提到虽然学校提供了高质量的服务,如预装空调等,但缺乏宿舍内的互联网接入成为了一个亟待解决的问题。作者强调了互联网对学生日常生活的重要性,并提出希望能在宿舍内接入互联网以便更好地进行在线学习活动。

To whom it may concern:
    I am a student of East China Normal University. I would like to offer some suggestion about dormitories in our unveristy. By comparing with commondities of other university, I feel quite lucky to enjoy the high quality services from our university such as the pre-installed air-conditioners. However, there is one point I think which need to be improved: the absence of Internet access. 

 

To Whom It May Concern,

I am a student at our university. I would like to offer some suggestions about the telecom facility of students’ flat. By comparing with accommodation of other universities, I feel quite lucky to enjoy high quality services like the pre-installed air conditioners. However, the absence of Internet access seems an urgent issue to be solved.

 

The Internet has became essential part of our daliy life to everyone, let alone the students in university. We need take part in a lot of studying activies online such as dowloading the homework our teachers assigned. So it could be quite convinent if we can access the Internet in the dormitory instead of merely in the library. It could be very appericated if you could spend a few time to think about my suggestion and reply on it.

 

The Internet has became essential part in our daily life, we university students also take advantage of it massively. Downloading the homework, contacting professors via e-mail and browse paper online; all of these require Internet access. So it could be convinent if we can access the Internet in our accommodation rather than merely in the library. We will appericate it if you spend a little time to take our suggestions into consideration.

 

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

转载于:https://my.oschina.net/betayuan/blog/1563391

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