英语写作模板:引入==>论证(论点、论据)==>呼应
第一段的写法:引入(第一句)-引起关注(第二句)
Just as an old proverb says,where there is cooperation,there is success.(题干) This saying does trigger a heated discussion on web,an influential social media in china.
第二段的写法(6句):反驳相反观点(第一句)、提出本文观点(第二句)、引起人们关注(第三句)-展开(第四五句、举例/分角度)-总结(第六句)
The idea that a person can achieve personal success only with the individual efforts and hardworking oversimplifies.The effect of teamwork also matters,especially in this ever changing modern society. These days,the topic has captured wide media attention,occupying newspaper headline and sparking heated discussion on web.Take Jack Ma,the founder of Alibaba and Taobao,the largest electronic commerce platform in the world,for example.Beyond any dispute(毫无争议),it is the spirit of cooperation that helps this man establish a hugely successful company and bring great value to the share holders and the whole society.There is no exaggeration to say(毫无夸张的说) that were there no teamwork or cooperation,we can hardly taste the real happiness of the success.
第三段的写法:再次确认观点(第一句)、展望未来(第二句)
From my own perspective,teamwork is the steel that forges the supporting structure of the society,and the society can not grow steady,if this invaluable asset is ever neglected in any possible manner.At the end of the day,anyone who aspires to embrace the glorious future must fully realize the importance of the quality.
本文通过引用古谚语“合作带来成功”展开讨论,强调了在现代社会中团队合作对于个人成功的重要性。文章通过阿里巴巴创始人马云的例子说明了团队合作如何帮助建立一个巨大成功的企业,并为社会创造价值。

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