【SCI论文写作】斯坦福写作课程：Writing in the Sciences -Unit 2

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该篇博客主要介绍了Stanford写作课程中关于科学写作的第二单元，强调了使用主动语态的重要性，允许并鼓励使用第一人称"我们"和"我"。内容包括主动语态的定义、改写被动语态的实例、何时可以使用被动语态、使用强烈动词的建议以及避免使用模糊词语的提示。

Unit 2

Module 2.1: Use the active voice

Module 2.2: Is it really OK to use "We" and "I"?

Module 2.3: Active voice practice

Module 2.4: Write with verbs

Module 2.5: Practice examples

Module 2.6: A few grammar tips

Unit 2

Module 2.1: Use the active voice

使用主动语态

● "Subject verb object"

● What is the passive voice?

什么是主动语态？

-Object-Verb-Subject or Object-Verb

-Classic example: "Mistakes were made"

什么是被动语态？

-Passive verb = a form of the verb "to be" + the past participle of the main verb.

-The main verb must be a transitive verb (that is, take an object).

● Example:

-My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me (Passive voice).

-I will always remember my first visit to Boston (Active voice).

-She is loved.

-Cigarette ads were designed to appeal especially to children.

-(Try to rewrite as a active voice)

● More examples:

○ Passive: By applying a high resolution, 90 degree bending magnet downstream of the laser electron interaction region, the spectrum of the electron beams could be observed.-->

Active: We could observe the spectrum of the electron beams by applying a high resolution, 90 degree bending magnet downstream of the laser electron interaction region.