天涯梦(自己作品,欢迎点评)

 

 

                                                         一
                                              别后碎花梦秋深，
                                              细雨亭台又一村。
                                              江南莺雁明夜月， 
                                              不爱江山爱美人。
                                                         二 
                                元好问，千古问，问醉多少有情人？ 
                                天涯梦，痴痴梦，梦里落花又秋深！
                                                         三 
                                                  昨夜花睡深， 
                                                  可人竹楼影。
                                                  鼾声入池里，
                                                  恕笑皆是春。
                                                        四
                                             十里长亭花似锦，
                                             与君相约杏花村。
                                             夕阳醉香人羞月，
                                             古灯思梦最良晨。
                                                       五
                                     去年花，今年花， 
                                        花谢花开水无涯。
                                           谁家梁前雁？ 
                                               不识山人夜煮茶。
                                    今又春，明又秋，
                                        春去秋来灯未尽
                                           何时月映人？ 
                                               不解山人不饮茶。

                                                                 六
                                               晨起贮窗台，疑是伊人来。
                                               对镜忙梳洗，秋风吹雾开。

                                                      那一天
                        那一天，我走出碧草晴日，不见天蓝，惊识梅开。
                        那一月，我把玩西湖牙月，不为吟风情，只愿梅早开。
                        那一年，世世道道人情，双燕相遇却相思，禁相思。
                        那一世，山山水水竟无涯，水载舟，为听梅来！

                                      最是伤情床前月,一夜东风泪尽干!
                                             恨君去年不识月，今晨赏月月已东。
                                             朝朝暮暮月常在，一生一世不了情。

 

                                          寒山孤城戚戚夜
                                          梅子霜打点点白
                                          傲竹不屈铮铮骨
                                          雪压始现高洁台

 

                                      最是伤情床前月，一夜东风泪尽干。
                                      天涯从此两陌路，落枫清影入梅园。