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As is illustrated in the picture(图画描述),xxxx.

//mple as it is ,the drawing renders us pondering awefully.

Accordingly,what this far-reaching picture depicts reflects a common phenomeon in today’s society:(主题)

It gose without saying that its symbolic meaning that indifference should  be  cleared up among people,with the harmonious society echoed vigorouely nowadays in china oought to be weighted .

 

//p2
why do we lay emphasic on this?

several points /analyzed below might equip us  with the deeper understanding /of what we are heading for.

For one thing,xxx(个人)

For another,(社会)

And above all,（国家）.

(2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.

 

No better illustraition        of this idea touched on above           can be maintained  than the case as listed below.

Accordingly,no issue in china is as basic to build up the society in  harmony as  ironing out indefference among people.

 

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Juding  from what have been argued avove,people hava come to realize the harms of indifference has been,like Pandor’s box,the cripping force of establishing the harmony society. (点题）

It is,therefore,necessary that some effective steps be made to  narrow and bridge the gap among people.

To being with,（国家）the goverment should make a law to establish the society in which  people live in harmony. //the Outlook of Scientific Development

In addition,（个人）people should enhance the awareness of concern and care each other especailly.

Only by undergoing these measures,can we make our society,where people even not knowing

eachother,help among them ,appeal to everyone.