英语作文原来这么难

---一片简单的影评

Love warm ice age

--base on ice age one

The ice age story arounds three animals and a baby, they confronted boiling lava pits, ice caves, code weather. The tighter wanted the baby, But theyestablished of friendship between them at the

last.

 

  Humans haunt tigers,  standing the human perspective , this is right ,but you are tigers  ,I suddenly felt more sympathy of tigers , they must protect themselves to survive .what’s more , the human had killed many tigers .As a result ,they wanted to kill the baby.

 

  The little baby is happy. He meet Manfred , a friendly animal .he had a sincere care and played with Sid , he slowly grew ,learned to walk .  But they will eventually leave, finally, Sid said : very old-fashioned ice age ,the greenhouse effect will be popular .I suppose so .

   如果是考试，也许大家还能写的不错，但是随笔让大家写，还真难。我一手百度找素材（中文），一手用google翻译（通过这次发现google真不咋地，后改用有道），终于草稿完成。最后誊写时，发现错误百出，当然想在也有。

   希望细心地你指出！！！

  thank you ！