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well,i am going to make a summary of writing.

i mean writing test of problem solving type.

first,we should write a sentence which is for background introduction.

it is like the first sentence in the writing of discussion type

second sentence is just for telling others that we want to explain the causes and solutions.

like a common sentence,i will write it down.

Both the causing effects and possible solutions will be further discussed in following paragraphs.

it is the most simple way.just tell others we will discuss it.

Both the causing effects and possible solutions will be further discussed in following paragraphs.

and also,we can use a better sentence.

As closely intertwined with people's present life

as closely intertwined with people's present life

it is of vital significance to discuss the elements causing this problem

try our best to find out solutions

well,this is the beginning.let us move on to the main body.

we should write down two points and give two evidences and finally give a ending.

we also should write down two solutions and give two evidences and also give a ending.

finally it is the ending or conclusion.

so there is a model essay below.

the discussion of pollution is now unremittingly found in headlines

the topic of pollution is now unremittingly found in headlines

the phenomenon of pollution is now unremittingly found in headlines

headlines of TV programs and newspapers

which continuously serves as an alert towards both positive and negative outcomes people may embraces.

there are diverse factors causing the emergence of this problem

there are diverse problems that may be caused by this phenomenon

under the interference of elements above

from the interference of elements above

the origin of such a problem would easily find sufficient land to take root

the origin of such a problem

would easily find sufficient land to take root

in respect to the solutions of this issue

in respect to the effects of this issue

the keys lie in the following areas

the causing effects are diverse as mentioned above

which worth our special attention

in order to fight against it

we have to take direct measures

thus conquering this challenge

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A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced?

In general, cities achieved a higher living standard than rural areas. As closely intertwined with people’s present life, it is of vital significance to discuss possible results caused by this problem meanwhile try our best to find out solutions.

There are diverse problems that may be caused by this phenomenon. First of all, the wealth gap between urban and rural areas may lead to conflicts between urban residents and rural residents. Some arrogant city dwellers may despise some rural people, which makes rural people feel gloomy and angry. Harmonious relationship between civilians will be seriously corroded. Secondly, a sense of mistrust will be arise if some rural residents cannot enjoy the benefits of economic development. If the government do not invest enough money to build some infrastructures in rural areas, rural people will not able to see changes in the hometown. Consequently, the government may lose trust. Possible results above are likely to appear.

In respect to the solutions, the keys lie in the following areas: on the one hand, the government need to balance the fiscal expenditure between cities and rural areas. A rational distribution of public revenue can help cities and rural areas develop in a harmonious way. While cities are developing rapidly, rural areas will have reliable infrastructures. On the other hand, the will of people should be better understood. For instance, the government can do some public opinion polls such as questionnaires and online surveys, which allows the government to understand various viewpoints and suggestion from civilian. Appropriate solutions may relieve some problems.

The possible results are diverse as mentioned above, which worth our special attention. In order to create a better society, we have to take direct measures, thus conquering this challenge.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why? What can be done to attract local people?

In general, most museums and historical sites attract more tourists instead of local people. As closely intertwined with people’s present life, it is of vital significance to discuss the elements causing this problem meanwhile try our best to find out solutions.

There are diverse factors causing the emergence of this problem. First of all, many tourists attractions lack of innovation. Some local people have been to nearby scenic spots for several times meanwhile most museums or historical sites will spend a long time to launch some new activities. Therefore compared to the nearby places, people prefer to visit somewhere they have not been to. Secondly, some scenic spots do not have a rational management. For instance, we can often see some uncivilized behaviors in the tourists attraction. Some notice boards should be placed to warn people who throw their garbage in the river or spit on the floor.Under the interference of elements above, it is reasonable for local people to be disappointed.

In respect to the solutions of this issue, the keys lie in the following areas: on the one hand, most scenic spots should pay more attention to bringing forth new ideas. Scenic spots can form a innovation team to investigate people’s preferences as well as organize some new activities which can attract local people. On the other hand, a appropriate management system should be built up. For instance, tourists attractions can place some notice board to warn people do not do some improper behaviors. Similarly, suitable punishment can also restrain people’s behaviors.

The possible results are diverse as mentioned above, which worth our special attention. In order to attract more local people, we have to take direct measures, thus conquering this challenge.

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People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?

Recommitting of crimes is one of the most severe problem in the society. As closely intertwined with people’s present life, it is of vital significance to discuss the elements causing this problem meanwhile try our best to find out solutions.

There are diverse factors causing the emergence of this problem. First of all, certain punishments do not act as deterrence. If some penalties are not so severe and fearful for criminals, these offenders may commit crimes again. Criminals will regret his behaviors after experienced the punishment. Secondly, after some criminals are out of prison, they do not even have a survival skill, leading to unemployment. Without any income, stealing or other illegalities may become possible way for criminals to get money. Under the interference of elements above, it is likely for some people continue to commit crimes.

In respect to the solutions of this issue, the keys lie in the following areas: on the one hand, the government can strengthen certain punishments reasonably, which allow criminals receive punishment severely, may leading to a low crime rate. The law has to have deterrent force which can make it to be a untouchable boundary. On the other hand, prisons can provide some skill training. When criminals are serving their sentences, some kinds of skill training not only can help criminals learn survival abilities, but also may make their lives more meaningful. Appropriate solutions may relieve this problem.

The possible results are diverse as mentioned above, which worth our special attention. In order to to fight against it, we have to take direct measures, thus conquering this challenge.