钻石模板-六级作文

第二段和第三段：

◆第二段

① These figures present a phenomenon that 主题(一句话).

【贴士1】主题最好写一句话，可以用句型：it is important for us that....，或者people pay more attention to.....

【贴士2】phenomenon是得分点，于杉老师觉得最好不要换成别的词。

③ First, as the economic performance is improving at the faster pace, more people focus on the material aspects and practical benefits, which are the necessary need of technological advances，better infrastructure and environmental conservation in modern times.

【译文】首先，随着经济状况改善地速度非常快，更多的人关注物质方面和实际利益，这是技术进步，当代更好的基础设施和环境保护的需求。

④ Second, when people reach the stable living standards, people begin to take more elements into consideration, specially higher education, quality, feature, traditional legacy and others.

【译文】第二，当人们到达了稳定的生活水平，人们就开始考虑更多要素，尤其是更好的教育，质量，特征，和传统文化等。

【贴士】一般考研英语大作文都会上升到文化，精神的高度，所以会有这个精神方面的原因

⑤ Third, in diverse and personalized world, young people are likely to take different attitudes toward competition and stress distinct capabilities in terms of increased social pressure.

【译文】第三，在多变和个性化的世界里，年轻人想要对竞争采取不同的态度，而且强调不同的能力，鉴于更多的社会压力。

◆第三段

① These reasons could represent the fact that 主题！

【贴士】主题一定要放在显眼的地方，告诉批卷子老师你没有跑题，那么，如何看图一定不会跑题呢？还需要结合于杉老师直播视频，详解如何做到不跑题！

② This will go a long way toward the future, but only when everyone is supposed to take adaptable measures to better behaviors, the society will definitely become harmonious.

【译文】这个情况将走很远的路，但是只要当每个人应该采取适当的措施去优化行为，这个社会将绝对会和谐的。

③ Whatever questions we meet with in the making, we will come over them and pursue ideals and dreams for individuals and China.

【译文】无论我们在运作中遇到什么问题，我们将克服它们，而且追求理想和梦想为了个人和中国。

【初衷】于杉老师觉得，任何一篇文章， 写出来都是为了对将来有更好的意义，无论是好事坏事，都是为了让将来变得更好，所以肯定是要有对将来的展望