北京科技大学通用学术英语Mooc作文 大一下（20级版）

注：所选用文章均来自20级学生，不是范文，仅供参考，想拿高分的还是自行动笔为上。（文章整体预估得分区间为85~95）

大一下

U1 an introductory paragraph

                                        Social media's impact among young women

        Today, with the wide spread of mobile phones, social media has become an important part of our daily life. However, social media can cause anxiety among young women.

      Social media creates a place for people to share information and comment, but it also provides the environment for people to compare. Whereas 1 in 4 women in reality are obese, on social network the rate is less than 10 in 100.Then, when a young woman surfs on social network, she could find nearly everyone is underweight except herself. In general, young women in the authentic world will feel nervous because of the fake phenomenon they found on the Internet.

U2 cause and effect paragraph

                                                     The Internet of Things

    The Internet of Things is the next big thing in our daily life. The reasons why it happens can be listed as follows. 

    To begin with, the first thing we should know is what the Internet of things is. In brief, it is a system that gathers information directly from multiple devices, analyzes data, and then uses the information to make people's lives more efficient. 

    Moreover, it's widely recognized that the Internet of Things opens the door to the smart home. Via this technology, machines are communicating with one another, and then acting without human intervention. For example, refrigerator can order food from a grocery store, which is then delivered to your doorstep. 

    Meanwhile, the Internet of Things can be a solution in traffic jams. Using sensors and other tools, it can collect and combine incoming streams of data from informational and operating systems, which will help in anticipating events and help drivers take driving deci