英语新概念2-回译法-lesson11

托尼斯蒂尔进来的时候我正在吃饭，托尼很多年前在一家律师事务所工作，但是他现在在银行工作。他有一份不错的薪资，但是他总是问他的朋友们借钱并且从不归还。托尼看到我然后走过来和我坐在同一张桌子。他从来没有问我借过钱。当他在吃饭的时候，我问他借了20磅。令我惊讶的是，他立即就把钱给我了。“我从来没有问你借过钱"托尼说"所以你现在可以支付我的午餐了！”

I was eating in a restaurant when Tony Steele came into,Tony had worked at a lawer office,but he is working at a bank.He has a good salary,but he always lent money from his friends and never pay for them.Tony saw me and come to me,then he was sitting at the same table.He never ask me for lenting money.While he was eating,I ask him to lent 20 prounds.To my surprised,he gave me money immditatly.“I never browe your money” Tony said"So you could pay for my meal!"
翻译的稀巴烂，需要翻译第二次

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改正后的翻译：

1. came into 应改为 came in.
   • I was eating in a restaurant when Tony Steele came in.
2. lawyer office 用词不准确，应该使用 law firm.
   • Tony had worked at a law firm, but now he is working at a bank.
3. he always lent money from his friends and never pay for them 应改为 he always borrowed money from his friends and never paid them back.
   • He has a good salary, but he always borrowed money from his friends and never paid them back.
4. come to me 的时态错误，应改为 came over to me.
   • Tony saw me and came over to me, then he sat at the same table.
5. He never ask me for lending money 中有时态和表达错误，应改为 He had never asked me to lend him money.
   • He had never asked me to lend him money.
6. I ask him to lent 20 pounds 中有时态和语法错误，应改为 I asked him to lend me 20 pounds.
   • While he was eating, I asked him to lend me 20 pounds.
7. To my surprised 错误，应改为 To my surprise.
   • To my surprise, he gave me the money immediately.
8. “I never browe your money” 中的 browe 是拼写错误，应改为 borrowed.
   • “I’ve never borrowed your money,” Tony said, “so now you can pay for my meal!”

I was eating in a restaurant when Tony Steele came in. Tony had worked at a law firm, but now he is working at a bank. He has a good salary, but he always borrowed money from his friends and never paid them back. Tony saw me and came over to me, then he sat at the same table. He had never asked me to lend him money. While he was eating, I asked him to lend me 20 pounds. To my surprise, he gave me the money immediately. ‘I’ve never borrowed your money,’ Tony said, ‘so now you can pay for my meal!’