14、技术信息写作：让内容更具体、风格更合适

技术信息写作：让内容更具体、风格更合适

1. 让示例和场景更清晰

在技术信息写作中，为示例和场景设置背景非常重要。比如在介绍如何通过按键序列在手机中设置铃声时，如果只是简单给出示例，像 “4 4 4 (1#) 2# 2# 2# (1)”，没有说明这代表什么歌曲，不熟悉按键序列的人可能就难以理解。

原示例

To enter a ringtone in your cell phone by using a keypress sequence, do the following steps:
1.  Select Settings —> Ringtone Composer.
2.  Select New Tone.
3.  Type the keypress sequence for the melody that you want.
For example:
4 4 4 (1#) 2# 2# 2# (1)
Ignore the display on the screen. It reflects the composer's transposition of what you have typed.
4.  Press OK. Name your melody and save it. The new melody will be listed with your other ringtones.

修订示例

To enter a ringtone in your cell phone by using a keypress sequence, do the following step