Unipus-writing exercise Expository_Text_05

动态图表+动态图表描述要点（两个对比组）

The pie charts below shows untis of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

首段

改写题目

The charts compare the amounts of electricity created by different energy sources in two countries in 1980 and 2000.

主体部分第一段（描述比较主要的能源）

澳大利亚的最高值Coal，然后对比法国

The units of electricity created by coal, the main energy source in Australia, more than doubled to 130 in 2000, but this energysource was much less important in France, producing 25 units of electricity only in both years.

法国的最高值是Nuclear Power

Nuclear power was the prominent energy source in France, with the figure rising more than eight fold to 126 units in 1000, but Australia did not use this energy source.

主体部分第二段（描述其他的能源）

Hydro Power

The amount of electricity created by hydro power also increased significantly from 20 to 36 units in Australia, while this fuel source was less important in France , creating 2 units of electricity only in 2000.

Natural Gas

The figures for natural gas declined in both countries to 2 units.

Oil

The proportion of electricity created by oil also saw a different trend in these two countries, increasing slightly to 25 units in France but falling steeply to 2 units in Australia.

总结段

总结趋势和主要特征

Overall，Australia and France relied on different fuel sources. While coal and hydro power were important in Australia, nuclear power dominated France’s energy sector.

学习要点

这种动态图表有两组不同的对比对象。
首先将对比对象进行一定的级别分类。如果出现了国家则主要对比国家，其他的对比对象其次。
本文侧重澳大利亚和法国所有能源的对比：不是先写澳大利亚的所有能源，再写法国的所有能源，而是在每种能源上对比澳大利亚和法国的情况。
趋势对比：主要是第二对比组对象的趋势（类似的或者相反的趋势）。
大小对比：第一对比组对象各自的高值。第二对比组对象的相对大小。

动态图表（两组对比对象）的内容要点

主体部分	主要是描述第二对比组不同对象的各自趋势。对比第一对比组的对象。	主要是描述不同能源（第二对比组）的变化趋势。然后每种能源分别对比国家（第一对比组）
顺序	从第一对比组各自数值比较高的对象开始说起	从澳大利亚和法国比较高的值说起
结尾	关注比较高的值的趋势对比	不需要说所有的对象的趋势，关注比较高的值就可以