2024.12.09 C16Test1作文
题目意思:下图显示了一个国家在1920至2019年间电器所有权和家庭做家务时间的变化,通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息,并在相关时进行比较。
范文:
The lines illustrate the changing percentage of the electronic appliances ownership and the weekly time allocated to housework, including washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning, from 1920 to 2019. overall, with the proliferation of versatile electrical appliances, people had been living a more convenient life with higher efficiency, which can be mirrored by the ever-decreasing hours spent in addressing domestic trivialities.
- proliferation: n.增值 近义词 growth
英英翻译:growth by the rapid multiplication of parts
- verstile: adj. 多才多艺的 近义词 skilled
常用词组:versatile person
- Ever-decreasing: n. 过度降低
- Triviality: n.琐事 近义词 unimportance
这个折线图展现了从1920年到2019年电器拥有者和每周家务时间包括洗衣服、准备晚餐和清洁的改变。毕竟,随着多种电器的使用,人们用更高的效率过着一种更加方便的生活,这可以从花费在做传统琐事上的时间的快速减少来反映。
欧路翻译:这些线条说明了从1920到2019年,电子产品拥有百分比和每周分配给家务,包括洗衣服、准备饭菜和清洁的时间的变化,整体而言,随着多功能电器的普及,人们的生活越来越方便和效率更高,这可以从花在处理家务琐事上的时间不断减少反映出来。
句子分析:
The lines illustrate the changing percentage of the electronic appliances ownership and the weekly time allocated to housework, including washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning, from 1920 to 2019.
Trunk: the lines illustrate the changing percentage ......and time..
这些线条说明了百分比和时间的改变
Past participles make definite sentences: allocated to housework
分配给家务
Now the word participle is the insertion: including washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning.
包括洗衣服,准备饭菜和清洁
The ownership of refrigerators and vacuum cleaners had seen massive growth. Specifically, in terms of refrigerators, no household owned it in 1920, but the ownership of them had the sharpest increase compared with that of the remainders. Notably, since 1980, having refrigerators had become commonplace, without no household being no exception. While owing vacuum cleaners had not been as popular as owing refrigerators until 2000, the ownership of them also witnessed a substantial growth of 70%. those drastic increases contrasted sharply with the slight one in the ownership of washing machines, from 40% to roughly 63%.
- refrigerator: n. 冰箱 常用词组 electric refrigerator 电冰箱
- Vacuum: n. 真空,空白 常用词组 vacuum pump 真空泵
- Sharp: adj. 锋利的 英英词义 clearly defined
- Remainder: n. 残余物 常用词组 remainder term
- Commonplace: adj 普通的,平凡的 n. 陈腔滥调
常用词组 fairly commonplace 相当常见
- drastic:adj 激烈的 常用词组 drastic action 剧烈反应
- Contrast: n.对比 vi 对比 英英翻译 the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared
- Slight: adj 轻微的 n. 怠慢 vt.轻视 常用词组 slight fever 低烧
冰箱和真空清洗剂的使用者已经有了巨大的增长。尤其是冰箱的使用者,1920年还没有房间有他,但相比较于以前,冰箱的使用者有了急剧的上升。不完全统计,从1980年,有冰箱这件事已经很普遍了,没有一家除外。直到2000年为止当拥有真空清洗机并不像拥有冰箱那样普遍时,真空清洗机的使用者眼看着增长到了70%,这种快速的增长和洗衣机的缓慢增长有了很强烈的对比,从40%到大约63%。
欧路翻译:冰箱和真空继承其的拥有量大幅增长,具体来说,就冰箱而言,1920年没有家庭拥有它,但与其他部分相比,他们的拥有量增长最快。值得注意的是,自1980年以来,拥有冰箱已经变得司空见惯,没有一家例外。虽然直到2000年,拥有真空吸尘器才像拥有冰箱那样受欢迎,但他们的拥有量也见证了70%的大幅增长。这些急剧的增长与洗衣机拥有量的微小增长形成鲜明对比,从40%到大约63%。
精读:
Specifically, in terms of refrigerators, no household owned it in 1920, but the ownership of them had the sharpest increase compared with that of the remainders.
Trunk: no household owned it but the ownership of them had the sharpest increase.
没有家庭拥有冰箱,但是冰箱的使用量快速增长
Past participles make definite sentences: compared with that
与那些相比
While owing vacuum cleaners had not been as popular as owing refrigerators until 2000, the ownership of them also witnessed a substantial growth of 70%.
Trunk: the ownership witnessed growth
拥有量见证了增长
While-led temporal adverbial clause: while owing vacuum cleaners had not been as popular as owing refrigerators until 2000
直到2000年拥有真空清洗机才像拥有冰箱那样普遍
In terms of the weekly hours spent on housework by each household, a dramatic plunge, from 50 hours to 11 hours, happened over the period from 1920 to 1980. in the next 20 years, the figure had been stable, and then the number was taken to a new low (10) by a slight slip.
- plunge: /plʌndʒ/ n.投入,vi./vt.陷入
英英翻译:a brief swim in water or throw into
2.slip: /slɪp/ n.滑倒 vi/vt滑倒,使滑动 adi滑动的
英英翻译:a socially awkward or tackless act
从1920到1980阶段发生了每周花费在家庭事务上的时间有一个戏剧性的下降,,由50个小时到11小时。在未来20年,这个数字大致会稳定,然后可能会有新的通过缓慢的滑动降低到10小时
欧路翻译:就每个家庭每周华仔家务上的时间而言,从50小时到11小时急剧下降到1920年,在接下来的20年里,这个数字一直保持稳定,然后这个数字又因轻微下滑而降至新低(10)
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