IELTS

2024.11.22

一．题目：implementing a fur clothing ban is the only effective way to prevent animal cruelty in the fashion industry. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

二．结构.三段式（第一段：用自己的话将题目附属一遍，并给出自己是同意还是不同意，给出一个主要的原因；第二段：分步骤论述原因，带来的影响；第三段：总结上述自己的内容）

三.文章抄写：

The ethical implications of using fur in fashion have long sparked heated debates. While some advocate for an outright ban on fur clothing as the sole solution to prevent animal cruelty, I partially disagree with this assertion, believing that a multifaceted approach is more effective. Admittedly, a ban on fur clothing would directly tackle the root of animal cruelty in the fashion industry. By outlawing fur, the industry would be forced to seek alternative materials, thus reducing the demand for animal pelts. This would not only save countless animals from suffering but also send a strong ethical message, reinforcing the importance of animal welfare.

However, implementing a complete ban overlooks the complexity of the issue. Firstly, such a ban could adversely impact communities for whom fur trading is a livelihood. Moreover, the alternatives to fur, such as synthetic materials, often come with their environmental costs, such as increased plastic pollution. Hence, a ban on fur might inadvertently shift the problem rather than solve it. A more comprehensive approach would involve stringent regulation of the fur industry, ensuring treatment of animals and sustainable practices. Educating consumers about the impact of their fashion choices and promoting cruelty-free alternative can also play a significant role. By increasing awareness and providing ethical options, the industry can gradually shift towards more humane practices without the abrupt economic shock a total ban might entail.

In conclusion, while a ban on fur clothing might seem a straightforward solution to animal cruelty in fashion, it oversimplifies the issue. A balanced approach that includes regulation, education, and promotion of alternative is more likely to bring about long-lasting and effective change.

四.词汇和短语

Ethical implication------伦理含义

Heated debates------激烈辩论

Outright ban------完全禁止

Multifaceted approach-------多方面的方法

Ethical treatment -----伦理待遇

Sustainable practices-------可持续性的做法

Cruelty-free alternative------无虐待替代品

Economic shock--------经济冲击

Long-lasting and effective change------长久有效的改变

Oversimplifies-------过于简化

五：打字总用时长：26分钟。所以后续要做到的程度为：光打字的话争取十分钟内打完。