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2024.11.18

一．文体：议论文（选择工作室，工资是最重要的考虑因素，在多大程度上你同意或不同意）

二.结构：三段式（第一段，给出自己的观点，是否是最重要的考虑因素，同意或者不同意的大致原因；第二段，加强自己的论点，给出至少三哥论点；第三段。给出总结归纳，并再次加强自己的论点）

三.文章抄写：

Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important. On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other nonfinancial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family.

Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn on our jobs as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly ,many people’s feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally ,some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society.

In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.

四：抄写出现的问题：键盘不熟悉，打字的时候需要看着键盘打，不能像打中文那样熟练；单词不熟悉，很大程度上英文打字慢是因为心里对这个单词不熟悉，所以手上的动作会有点迟缓；结构问题：抄写的时候并不能很顺畅的理解作者的结构安排。