找工作时的英文自我介绍

原链:http://www.englishforums.com/English/HowIntroduceMyselfInterview/dgnvq/post.htm


一个中国人写的原始版:

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you very much for reading my application and I am much honored to introduce myself here.

My name is ABC. I am 24 years old and I come from XXX, the capital of Hunan Province. I am seeking an opportunity to work with XXX as a Engineer. My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.

I have a bachelor degree with a major in Electronic field. I graduated from XXX University-widely considered one of the most beautiful universities of the world. During the 4 year undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished. I was granted scholarship every semester. Additionally, I applied a XXX patent, it was authorized in 2005.

In 2005, I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test.I selected Electronic Engineering of XXX University to continue my study. In the passing 1 year, my research and study dedicated to Linux. I applied another patent which was still in applying. I won the scholarship in 2006.

Besides, I participated in many school activities, which widened my horizons and gave me many opportunities to do practical work in companies. All of that were very useful to my major study.

During this period, I have learnt much. I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. The passing years offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence.

With a healthy body, with the solid professional knowledge, with the youthful passion, with the yearning for the future and the admiration of your company, I am eager to enter your company and make my share of contribution to it.

Thank you for your patience.

Best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

ABC

Any suggestion and the criticism. Thanks !




经加拿大人修改后:

Thank you very much for reading my application and I am much honored to introduce myself here.

My name is ABC. I am 24 years old and I come from ***, the capital of Hunan Province. I am seeking an opportunity to work with *** as a Engineer. My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.

I have a bachelor degree with a major in the Electronics field. I graduated from *** University, which is idely considered one of the best universities in the world. During tmy 4 years of undergraduate study, my academic results were always distinguished. I was granted a scholarship every semester. Additionally, I applied for a *** patent (for what?), and it was authorized in 2005.

In 2005, I was privileged to enter the graduate program, and the admission test was waived for me. I selected Electronic Engineering at *** University to continue my study. In the last (?) year, my research and studies were dedicated to Linux. I have applied another patent (for what?). I won a scholarship in 2006.

Besides, I participated in many school activities, which widened my horizons and gave me many opportunities to do practical work with various companies. All of this was very useful for my major study.

During this period, I have learnt much. I have learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. The passing years have offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence.

With a healthy body, with solid professional knowledge, with youthful passion, with yearning for the future and with admiration for your company, I am eager to join you and make my contribution.


其他更有价值的参考:http://www.blurtit.com/q590823.html-----》更加详细版,很多人的回答,包含了注意点,说辞,态度等。

http://www.ehow.com/how_2030877_properly-introduce-yourself.html--------》比较普通的大众导航性网站给出的建议。。

也可以google: introduce self job

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